Last Among the Disciples
You are the weakest of Archmage Hyun-cheol Ryu's five disciples, and the performance review that could expose you again is almost here.
Story facts
- Quests
- 17
- Quest completions
- 13
- Milestones earned
- 12
- Turns played
- 458
- Cast
- 5
- Languages
- English, Japanese, Korean, Simplified Chinese, Spanish, Brazilian Portuguese, and French
- Rating
- Teen
About this story
Hyun-cheol Ryu is the youngest Archmage ever to reach the 8th Circle, and his mage tower keeps no one who cannot perform. Ten disciples train under him, and you are the tenth in every ranking that matters: research speed, mana control, practical evaluation. The performance review that decides who stays is close, and everyone in the tower already knows where you will place.
Four of Hyun-cheol's disciples have already reached the 5th Circle and are marked as future Archmages. Jae-min Ko is polished, noble-born and quietly condescending toward anyone without results. Woo-jin Bae acts breezy and unbothered but keeps everyone at arm's length. Si-wan Jung is gentle in a distant, clinical way. Chae-yeon Im does not bother hiding that she dislikes you, and her real devotion is aimed at Hyun-cheol himself, not you. None of them expect you to matter.
Breakfast in the tower's dining hall is already tense the morning the story opens, and Hyun-cheol has not even arrived yet. How you talk your way through five people who all have reasons to underestimate you, in a place where only results earn respect, is entirely up to you.
Who you play
You are Hyun-cheol Ryu's tenth and least accomplished disciple, training beside four peers already marked as future Archmages. You cannot out-research or out-fight them, so the review that decides who survives in this tower will not be won on raw talent. How you handle Jae-min's cool condescension, Woo-jin's detachment, Si-wan's distance and Chae-yeon's open dislike, and whether you can earn even one of them as an ally, is your choice.
The cast
Hyun-cheol Ryu
the 8th Circle Archmage who dismisses the weak
Hyun-cheol built this tower and lets no one forget it takes results, not effort, to stay in it.
Jae-min Ko
the noble-born disciple who is polite and superior
Jae-min is twenty-four, a 5th Circle light mage from a noble house, and proud to be studying under an Archmage as celebrated as Hyun-cheol.
Woo-jin Bae
the blood mage who never lets anyone close
Woo-jin is twenty-five, a 5th Circle blood mage in the tower's combat research division, and the only talented mage his blood-mage family has produced in a generation.
Si-wan Jung
the quiet potion researcher who keeps his distance
Si-wan is twenty-two, a 5th Circle nature mage who spends most of his time on potion research, and the youngest of Hyun-cheol's top four disciples.
Chae-yeon Im
the galaxy mage who dislikes you and adores your mentor
Chae-yeon is twenty-three, a 5th Circle galaxy mage who researches ancient artifacts and prophecies, and the sharpest tongue in the tower.
What to expect
- Five very different mages, from a blunt master to a rival who dislikes you, all judge you by results you have not delivered yet.
- The performance review is close, and the tower's harshest teacher dismisses disciples who do not produce results.
- Chae-yeon's real feelings point at your mentor, not you, adding a complication to any bond you build with her.
Introduction
Narrator: Dawn in the mage tower was always bitterly cold. Hundreds of mana stones cast a ghostly light through the corridors, while harsh incantations and explosions sounded ceaselessly behind closed laboratory doors—a place steeped in an arrogance that tolerated not a single error in a line of equations. Founded by Hyun-cheol, the empire's youngest Eighth-Circle archmage, it was a place where only magical geniuses could draw breath. Hyun-cheol had ten disciples in all. Among them, Jae-min, Woo-jin, Si-wan, and Chae-yeon stood unrivaled. Already at the Fifth Circle in their early to mid-twenties, all four had been singled out by the Imperial Association of Archmages as candidates for the next generation of archmages. And among those dazzling talents stood you. Gifted enough by ordinary standards, you were little more than a blemish within this tower teeming with monsters. By the standards of Hyun-cheol, who ruthlessly cast out anyone who produced no results, you were always the name furthest behind. Research speed, control of mana, even practical magic assessments... In nothing could they so much as keep their peers' retreating backs in sight. And as the research showcase drew closer, with eyes across the empire turning toward it, the air surrounding you grew ever colder, ever sharper.
Jae-min Ko: Before breakfast began, freshly baked bread, warm soup, and carefully prepared fruit lay neatly arranged on the long wooden table in the tower's central dining hall.
Jae-min Ko: Beneath the soft glow of the magic lamps, the disciples began taking their seats one by one.
Jae-min Ko: His blond hair neatly swept back, Jae-min seated himself gracefully near the head of the table.
Jae-min Ko: He lifted a teacup in his white-gloved hand and gazed leisurely toward the dining hall entrance.
Jae-min Ko: Today is the interim report, isn't it?
Jae-min Ko: His tone was gentle and courteous.
Jae-min Ko: Yet it carried the effortless composure of someone already certain of the outcome.
Jae-min Ko: Have you finished all your preparations, Woo-jin?
Woo-jin Bae: Woo-jin sat with his chair tilted back, his chin propped on one hand.
Woo-jin Bae: His half-lidded red eyes drifted toward Jae-min in apparent annoyance.
Woo-jin Bae: You're exhausting first thing in the morning.
Woo-jin Bae: He gave the red potion bottle on the table a light tap with his fingertip.
Woo-jin Bae: It's just a report. You can throw something together and still pass.
Chae-yeon Im: A little later, Chae-yeon strolled into the dining hall.
Chae-yeon Im: Tucking her sky-blue hair behind her ear, she instinctively looked toward Hyun-cheol's seat first.
Chae-yeon Im: He's not here yet…
Chae-yeon Im: Murmuring to herself, Chae-yeon sat opposite Jae-min and crossed her legs.
Chae-yeon Im: It'll be a bit of a pain if he's in a bad mood today.
Chae-yeon Im: Her lips were smiling, but a trace of tension flickered in her eyes.
Si-wan Jung: Seated in a corner, Si-wan was quietly spooning up his soup.
Si-wan Jung: His green eyes turned briefly toward the door, then quickly dropped back to his bowl.
Si-wan Jung: …Everyone seems rather on edge this time.
Si-wan Jung: His voice was low and calm.
Si-wan Jung: Without saying anything more, he quietly lowered his gaze, his ears faintly flushed.
Try one of these first lines
I set my spoon down and meet Jae-min's eyes across the table. "Say what you're thinking, or keep it to yourself. Either way, I'm still here tomorrow."
I keep my head down over my bowl, voice quiet. "I know where I rank. I'm not asking anyone to pretend otherwise."
Questions about this story
How does Last Among the Disciples begin?
Dawn in the mage tower was always bitterly cold.
Who is in the cast of Last Among the Disciples?
Last Among the Disciples stars Hyun-cheol Ryu, the 8th Circle Archmage who dismisses the weak; Jae-min Ko, the noble-born disciple who is polite and superior; and Woo-jin Bae, the blood mage who never lets anyone close.
Who made Last Among the Disciples?
송지율 (@song_jiyul) created Last Among the Disciples on Teasa.
Is Last Among the Disciples free to play?
Yes. You can play the first 20 turns in your browser as a guest, and a free account keeps your chat.